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Once upon a time
(Isn't that how all the stories start?)
Well hers was a little different
(But I still know it by heart)

A beautiful princess
(Isn't that who all the stories star?)
Well she sure was beautiful
(Just not the way they are)

They are damsels in distress
(Locked away in towers)
But no prince came to save her
(And she would wait no more hours)

She wasn't weak
(She stood up tall)
She saved herself
(And showed them all)

She lives on free
(Her story remembered to this day)
No one had to save her
(She found her own way <3)
This ones got multiple meanings :)
interpret it in your own way, enjoy!
~Lindsay
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:iconteslaroxx:
TeslaRoxx Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Finally! A girl who can save herselfXD
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LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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diamondaria Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
This is absolutely amazing :)
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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:icondiamondaria:
diamondaria Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
my pleasure :)
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KingdomOfAnime38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
this is very good. its well writen and its cute!
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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:iconroxyrebel:
roxyrebel Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
omgosh i would love to make tis a song and sing it!!!! this is so amazing!!!
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! Feel free to sing it if you want XD
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:iconroxyrebel:
roxyrebel Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome!
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:iconstormsinthenight:
StormsintheNight Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
<3 Girls can kick ass too. ^^ Not all of us need someone else to save them.
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yup </3 but if harry potter or Jace or Simon or most of my other obsessions want to save me, they can feel free anytime..
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StormsintheNight Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
haha XD I agree with you there.
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:iconmikothehedgehog:
Mikothehedgehog Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing. I'm sick of the stories that always hint male dominance by having the prince save the princess OVER and OVER again. And I'm surprised there isn't a movie (well, not that I know of) that has the princess or female protagonist save herself.
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i know XD we should make one.
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:icontwistedgrimfaerytale:
twistedgrimfaerytale Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
i love this
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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:icononegoodnumber:
onegoodnumber Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Student General Artist
I love it.
Its nice to see a princess fend for her self, and not wait for someone to come save her!
Really awesome!
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, yes! <#
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:icononegoodnumber:
onegoodnumber Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Student General Artist
you are very welcome dear!
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:iconcosmowillome:
CosmoWillome Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! A beautiful princess that can fend for herself! ( like ma self :D)
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yupyup^^
even the non beautiful ones,(like ma self ^^)
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:iconcosmowillome:
CosmoWillome Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Heck yeah lol:D
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:iconbellasophiah:
Bellasophiah Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing!
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you<3
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nothingexpected15 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011   Writer
(Isn't that who all the stories star?) Lol - errorrr XD

Other than that, I love it :heart: Hooray for speaking in riddles XD
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
huh? error?
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:iconnothingexpected15:
nothingexpected15 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011   Writer
OH. Ooops XD Read that wrong. Sorry. I thought it was supposed to be the same as the line above.
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
nope XD
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:iconwoodawesome:
woodawesome Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
question. whats the error with it?
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:iconnothingexpected15:
nothingexpected15 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011   Writer
Nevermind, that was my error. I read the sentence wrong. XD
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:iconwoodawesome:
woodawesome Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
refudiated!! sir, we're sorry thats not a word.... IT IS NOW!!!!!
but its perfectly alright
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:iconbeautifulhorses:
BeautifulHorses Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!! :D
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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:iconbeautifulhorses:
BeautifulHorses Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
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:iconkranner98:
kranner98 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student Writer
There needs to be an independent fairy tale character. Women can fend for themselves nowadays :D
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
YES!
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:icontsuki-tai:
Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student Writer
beautiful :)
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
tHANKS <3!
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:icontsuki-tai:
Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Student Writer
np
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:iconmistydawnamara:
MistyDawnAmara Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
we're tough girls! who needs a prince?
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
But on that note, feel free to send me Harry potter any time.
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MistyDawnAmara Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDD lolz! if i ever capture him and wrap him up in duct tape, i'd be happy for you to take him off my hands.
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XxXBuri-ChanXxX Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:iconthisplz:
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50C1ALT3ND3NCY Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This sounds like it could be a beautiful song!! Well done!
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:iconluckyclover38:
LuckyClover38 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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